Monday, May 21, 2007

- by AC Lobos, Grade 11

There are things that roam in the darkness
In the bleak of midnight they run free and wild
None can see the bitter and empty hearts that they shelter
Free to witness the fear of all who approach their realm
Few can see them as they pass through a blanket of black
Darkness, their only friend

Shadowy ravens fly at the echo of their eerie laughter
Til the light of truth shows what was never there
Aid will never come to those who see it
For the memory will last till the curtain falls on man


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 5/21/2007
4:10 PM
5/21/2007 7:58:12 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
Wow!

First comment :)

that was really good. what was the animal creature thing?
Nice pic.
Shawn
5/22/2007 12:49:16 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
the creature is my imagination
5/23/2007 5:10:01 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
Dude! The poem Rocks!
You make Edgar Allen Poe proud!
Maybe I can post something too.
James
aka sawyer
ps
make a poem of lawn gnomes going boom
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