Thursday, April 02, 2009

In Issue 9, New York, New Life, we asked students to write to us about their neighborhoods. Here is one response.

When I was a little kid, about four, five, or six, I used to play Cops and Robbers with my brother and cousin, along with whoever wanted to play that day. I lived by West Side Middle School, in Branford Manor, to be exact. When I played, I always chose the robber team along with my brother and cousin. We were never the cops. We were only by ourselves against everyone in the neighborhood who played. I remember buying popsicles at the grocery store and having to wash my blueberry-stained lips.

When I was eleven, I went over to Branford Manor with my Mom to see her friend. I wandered off to our old apartment. While I was standing on my old step, I enjoyed a memory, one that I know will stay with me; the memory of Cops and Robbers. I spotted a few other children playing the game. I joined them and just left after about five minutes because it just wasn't the same. Everybody who played when I was younger no longer lived in that area.

   - Devon


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 4/2/2009
10:56 AM
4/7/2009 10:16:29 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
wow, devin you are such a good writer. Ive always know that, of course, because I am your mother. You are a very smart boy. I love you and just wanted to let you know that you are a sweetheart and i love you.....


your mother,
sheri kovalik
sheri kovalik
9/18/2009 8:46:48 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
Your imagery and words flow well. Way 2 go! It seems as if the only things that stay in the future as the past are only personal memories, right?
M.J. Lee
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