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Monday, January 09, 2006

- Poem by Eugene Levit, Grade 9

Searching for a story untold
Travel far and wide
From sea to sea
Hoping to find an inspiration
Searching for some inspiration
An idea to fall right on my head
A simple thought or suggestion
That could lead to a work of creativity
Searching for some creativity
Some brand new words
Maybe a different world
A world which is unique
Searching to be unique
Thoughts that come to me all on my own
Thoughts different from anyone ever before
Ideas which come to me from the depth of my mind

Posted by
StudentWriter
on 1/9/2006
11:39 AM

1/10/2006 12:17:09 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)

This is such a good poem

Eugene Levit

1/11/2006 10:05:45 AM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)

This poem was really good! Congrats Eugene

Andrew

1/14/2006 9:41:44 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)

The poem had good content, but did not flow as well as my poems do. Sorry Eugene, but only some have that talent!

Christina

1/17/2006 1:41:04 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)

Gee, Christina, why not send in a poem of your own? That way, we can all see your talent for ourselves. It's not easy to post your work for the world to see. It takes guts. Criticism is fine, but it's best when it's given in a generous and helpful spirit.

Deb

1/17/2006 2:31:04 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)

I second that!

Bryon

1/20/2006 9:58:20 AM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)

I agree with Christina. I didnt like you used the words twice at the end of the line. It just doent flow well. But if you like it thats okay.

Kate

1/20/2006 10:02:51 AM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)

i didnt like the way you kept repeating words it was nice but the reeating got annoying.

wilma

1/30/2006 1:53:02 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)

nice! I might try doing a poem! It was great!

shanni

1/31/2006 5:13:12 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)

i LOVE your poem it great!!!!!!!^^

steph

3/31/2006 2:17:59 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

I am the same way as you because I use my own thoughts just like you.

Ronald

3/31/2006 3:17:41 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

You are a very good writer and you remind me of myself when i write poems of my own. You think of deep thoughts and we seem to have a lot in common when it comes to writing. You are fantastic keep up the good work.

Kya odom

4/13/2006 9:42:31 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

i liked the poam "life of a writer" because it talks about how it always looking for inspiration and ideas to help him figure out who he is as a writer. i feel like this poam says alot about myself because i am always lurking for something to new to learn and something new to explore.

jesse

4/30/2006 4:38:03 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

thx! maybe you're searching for inspiration, but when i read your poem, this fantastalistic idea collided with my brain. that's a really special talent and i have to say that i am really impressed and wish that i could inspire people like you do.

karey

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