Wednesday, September 20, 2006
According to a well-worn proverb, a picture is worth a thousand words. In the September 2006 issue of Writing, we published a photograph of a red-eyed tree frog (Agalychnis callidryas) which was taken on a rainy day by photographer Michael Durham. We asked you to write a story about this frog -- to give it a name, describe its surroundings, and imagine the events that brought it to this moment. Your story could be 50 words, 100 words, the proverbial 1,000 words--or more. Here is one of our favorite submissions.

Croaky The Frog

- Story by Andrea Nielsen-George, Grade 7

It was a great day in the Amazon until Croaky the rain forest frog came into the trees and told everyone the bad news. "Everyone, everyone! The weather has just been announced!"

 

"Well, Croaky what is the news?" asked all the animals of the forest. 

 

Trying to catch his breath, Croaky answered, "King Lion said that there is to be some rain today!"

 

Everyone looked at him as their faces dropped.

 

Sally Spider said sarcastically, "Croaky, if you haven't noticed, this is a rainforest.”

 

Mary Moth said, "Yeah, it rains here everyday."

 

All the animals turned around and left Croaky by himself. Croaky thought that everyone would thank him, but instead they were aggravated with him.

 

Croaky went to go find a leaf big enough to cover him. "Ah-ha," he said to himself. "This is a huge leaf. It will do for the storm."

 

He sat and waited for about a half hour and said, "That’s it, those guys were right, it rains here everyday!" He hopped down to the ground to go find his friends. He looked high and low, near and far, but no one was there. He walked a little more, looked up, and all of the animals were in the tree under an enormous leaf.

 

"Hey everyone, what are you doing up there?" Croaky asked.

 

Paul Python said, "Well, Croaky we believe you and are starting a fire and we're going to have a camp-out tonight, but we can't start the party without you."

 

Croaky thought for a second. "Of course I’ll come up there with you!"

 

When he got up there the rain started and so did their party! They told scary ghost stories, made s'mores and sang songs. When it was time to go to sleep, each of the animals pulled a leaf off the tree, and went to sleep.

 

In the morning, Croaky woke up and was excited that the rain had stopped.

 

Croaky rubbed his eyes and gave a great yawn.

 

Larry Leopard woke up and jumped from the very top branch to the one above Croaky's head.

"Some campout last night, wasn’t it?"

 

Croaky replied, "It sure was. I can’t wait to do it again!"

 

Larry said with a yawn, "Come on, Croaky. I think there are some left over s'mores."

 

Larry crouched down and Croaky leaped onto his head. "Hold on tight!" Larry said with a soft voice.

     

Soon everyone got up and went off the tree. They joined Larry and Croaky for breakfast. They had a delicious meal and talked about what a wonderful time they had last night.


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 9/20/2006
3:05 PM
9/20/2006 11:20:10 PM UTC
Very creative with the whole camp out thing.
Saphir Shemesh Grade 7
9/21/2006 6:07:23 PM UTC
I'm so proud of you Andrea!
Mrs. Marzec
9/22/2006 1:48:39 PM UTC
it was a pretty good story,but it was too predictable.
larry
9/23/2006 8:28:44 PM UTC
Great job Andrea!
Annie
9/27/2006 1:15:32 PM UTC
it was an okay story.you just need more than what you had and need more details.
axel
9/27/2006 5:12:50 PM UTC
I cant believe a frog talks and says its going to rain
zach
9/27/2006 5:16:29 PM UTC
I picked the frog because my mom likes frogs amd this one is cool.
christopher ripley
9/27/2006 5:40:05 PM UTC
wasn't a good story, no purpose of party. animals were aggrivated with croaky, and all of the sudden they were friends.
j.galletta
10/2/2006 8:56:14 PM UTC
Wow! What a great story.
Alex
6/6/2007 8:13:29 PM UTC
I think that this is the best story ever!
andrea
7/4/2007 3:36:52 AM UTC
well, that was a weird story. why am i reading this now? oh well. i guess its better than mine. good job, two thumbs up, and uh-yeah. whatever. COOL!
Maddie
7/4/2007 3:47:26 AM UTC
i thought this story was great. i think that others can be allowed to have their own opionion. seeing as how andrea is my bestest friend in the whole world, i hope everybody loved this story. it is such a great and thrilling story. i think everybody should enjoy the loveable character of croaky.
P.S.i want to be a critic when i go up. so, i should probably say the truth. Though a good concept, it kinda fell flat in the actual plot.
Prescott
7/4/2007 10:11:58 PM UTC
i loved the story! i can't believe how cleverly crafted it was!!!
Prescott
7/17/2007 12:32:57 AM UTC
Andrea, I love you! It is so amazing what your work can inspire in a guy like me. I'm not even the kind of guy that reads often. Your work has made me want to read more and discover worlds of my own.
Davey McSnoox
1/17/2008 7:16:07 PM UTC
Nice job!!!!!!! You Rock girl!!!!!!
Bob bobenstein
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