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Tuesday, March 28, 2006

A short by Garrick, Grade 10

Cotton candy clouds lazily cross the baby blue sky. A gentle summer breeze lightly caresses a sea of grass as my baby brother laughs with sheer joy flying his bright red kite which flutters in the wind, a soaring phoenix. I watch him and silently chuckle to myself, "Not a care in the world." I lean against a great oak, the shade protecting me from the smiling sun, when from above a blue jay's song drops to earth and sings along with the chorus of life.

Posted by
StudentWriter
on 3/28/2006
5:14 PM

3/31/2006 11:55:37 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

that was a great article.It feels like i can feel the summer already.I can't wait for it to come.

arrow

3/31/2006 11:56:14 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

why would you write about soaring pheonix?do youlive there?

Ronecia

3/31/2006 2:09:44 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

he gives alot of details about the summer

joel

3/31/2006 2:53:42 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

It was intersting and it brings
back good memories.

angel

4/13/2006 10:07:17 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

I LIKE THIS STORY IT REMINDS ME OF MY NEPHEW

Quinton

4/13/2006 10:10:51 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

Summer song remindes me of fun times i had with my little broughter

robertdebout

4/13/2006 10:12:22 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

I think your poetic essay was beautiful and I really enjoyed it.

ruel

4/13/2006 11:00:16 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)

When I'm home I think of outside as you descride it in your story,using personification. I't is a nice story.

Jyanni

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