Sunday, December 24, 2006

- Poem by Danielle Maturo, Grade 9

Twelve candles on the birthday cake,
It happens every year,
I slowly blow out the flames,
As everyone begins to cheer.

They all ask what I wish for,
I look at them and smile,
"Maybe I'll tell you right now,
Or maybe not for a while."

The years have come and passed,
Faster than the blink of an eye,
My sixteenth birthday is today,
I go up to my room and cry.

I hear a knock on the door,
I quickly wipe my tears,
"Come in," I say in a quivering voice,
Through the door my mom appears.

She sits down softly on my bed,
And asks if it was something she did.
I look up at her with blurry eyes,
"I just want to stay a kid."

 

This is the 14th  and final piece of student writing in a string of two straight weeks of student writing! Check back in 2007 for lots more!


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 12/24/2006
1:41 PM
1/1/2007 12:12:25 AM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
its sad. i love it. no offence.
danie
1/5/2007 1:14:14 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
I loved it! I want to stay a kid forever too!
Breanna
1/7/2007 4:39:29 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)

I LOVED YOUR POEM AND ME MYSELF WANT TO STAY A

KID FOREVER! I REALLY FELT LIKE CRYING
1/17/2007 11:08:51 AM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
I wish I could stay a kid forever I'm also about to be sixteen
2/10/2007 9:07:09 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
This poem is for all those who don't try to be what they're not. It's great, I mean, who'd want to grow up and be old?
7/12/2007 9:45:30 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
yeah i know how you feel i never want to grow up, but you know what i know that i'll be a kid forever because i have a great imagination and i love being a kid that's who i am on the inside and i know i'll never give that up
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