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Monday, June 11, 2007

- Poem by Laura, Grade 6

running through the woods (faster faster)
tripping over the tree roots (faster faster)
i see a clearing in the woods (faster faster)
i run into the clearing (faster faster)
i see something in the shadows (faster faster)
it is coming out...

EEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!

out of the shadows it comes (faster faster)
it is a snake (faster faster)

faster I run out of the clearing faster
faster i look back and see the clearing
(faster faster) i trip over the tree
roots (faster faster) i am in the woods
(faster faster) I am at home in my warm

safe bed

slower

Posted by
StudentWriter
on 6/11/2007
7:48 PM

7/13/2007 12:00:58 AM UTC

wow great job its really great.. i write poems to they are really dark.. here is one of my poems...

As she sits in the dark in her room living and feeding off of the shadows and darkness that comes her way, the blood that she spilt are all of the pain and sufferings she has inside her soul, the pain and gulit and rage bulids up inside of her and tears her apart from the inside out, you may not see it but on the inside she hurts and bleeds for in the darkness she dies alone.
I hope you like it.. i wasnt trying to brag or anything ok ^_^ ur great at poems i loved ur poem

Jessica Moreno

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