Here are two, extremely brilliant student-written pieces based on the famous painting Nighthawks by Edward Hopper. (See back page of READ, Issue 2 for writing prompt). Insia and Nick did a wonderful job of capturing the essence of the painting. Great job!
The Story of Vevina DevourazBy Insia Khan.
The lighted diner on Merrybelle St. stood out against the barren windows of the surrounding stores. Vevina Devouraz let the door slam behind her as she entered Phillies Diner. She sat at her usual seat and greeted Old Frank the owner. She had just ordered her regular meal when a man slid into the chair beside her. He had an austere face with troubled eyes and a crooked nose. She was most unlike him, with her gentle looks and dark green eyes. Vevina’s fiery red curls contrasted with his dark hair that was slightly lined with gray.
"Hello" she said politely. He did not respond but gazed across the diner with a faraway look. Vevina looked down at her nails, wondering about his quietness.
Finally the man spoke. His voice was a soft wheeze that could barely be heard. "I am sorry, I could not hear what you ordered" Old Frank said. The odd man fell silent once more and returned to his thoughts. Vevina had by then finished her meal and was preparing to leave when she heard a distinct shriek coming from a small house down the block. She edged closer to the wall then noticed that the curios man was gone. "Had he not been here a moment ago," Vevina thought to herself, mystified. Rubbish! She reassured her racing mind. He had obviously been gone long ago and she had simply not noticed.
The next morning Vevina awoke drifting back to the dream she had had that night. She could not remember any part of it. She did remember that it was a disturbing dream and it had frightened her. Again she told herself no to worry and set out to work quite merry. A warmth spread through her as she reached the school where she taught--Springlane Elementary School.
Vevina entered the teachers' lounge as she always did in the mornings and found herself in a room full of excited gossip. "Did you hear ... how... next to Phillies ... The Charles home ... almost murdered ... entire family of ... lucky that man was there ... don't know who he was ... no one does ... old he had seemed but not more than 45 ... disappeared so fast ... didn’t even utter a single word." The sentences were muffled by others but Vevina could make out the story.
The Charles' home, down the block from Phillies had been intruded. The Family of 6, Bill, Elizabeth, and their 4 children had almost been murdered if it wasn’t for that secret man who vanished right after he had saved them. The man was not old but not young either.
Somehow she recognized this description but could not understand how until her thoughts wandered to her dinner last night.
Lonely Night for NighthawksBy Nick BrownA quarter past midnight the door swings open. The cook, busying himself by stacking glasses, glances at his wristwatch. The late customers are early tonight. Smiling at the paradoxical quality of that statement, he approaches the customer who just sat down at the counter. Setting his fedora down, the man grumbles that he'd like a cup of coffee: black. From under the counter the cook produces a marble white mug and fills it at a cylindrical coffee dispenser, a scent of dark coffee briefly floods his nostrils as well as hot wisps of steam. He slides the mug to the man across the counter who nods and emits a tiny "Thanks," never looking up at the cook.
The cook was used to this kind of attitude from the late crowd. If you're here at night it's either because you have nowhere better to be, or this is the best place you can go to. He returns to the back of the diner, rearranging cups, glasses, and making sure each pepper-shaker had a twin salt-shaker to go next to. Deciding he'd best leave the gloomy customer alone, he drifts back into the kitchen.From outside, the diner casts an eerie glow out onto the pavement. An unnatural sickly green pours out from the fluorescent lights, illuminating the corner. Above the diner an advertisement for Phillies Cigars ("Only 5 cents!") is barely visible in the glow. The name of the establishment completely shrouded in shadows. The night: still, dead and lonely. This part of the city was like that, not full of bustling night life like the rest of The City That Never Sleeps. That factor made this desolate block a haven for the less sociable night owls. A night like this was no exception.Across the street a woman sits with her hands in her lap. She sits on a bench with her eyes downcast, her shoulders sloped and sad. A crisp and steady breeze blows her dazzling red dress, the same red as the lipstick she had smeared on earlier that night. She had run away from dinner with her boyfriend three hours ago and she still has yet to return to her apartment. Now her eyes, puffy and red, are all but out of tears. A cabbie rolls by, catching the woman's attention as she looks up at the dull yellow of the streetcar and then the sick green of the diner lights. Her mouth is agape at who she sees inside.A second man in a fedora sits down at the counter, at a stool on the smallest side of the triangular counter. He's younger than the first patron, with a big pointed nose like the beak of a bird. The cook peers out of the kitchen sees that he has a new customer, then hurriedly gets up from his game of solitaire and greets his latest guest. This second man with the beak asks for water. A tad surprised at this request, the cook replies "Certainly," grabs another opaque mug and fills it up at the kitchen sink. Sliding the mug to the man the cook said "On the house" and then rolls his tongue around, as if saying something so cliche actually left a bad taste. But he isn't about to charge a man for water. This young man with the beak actually looks at the cook and utters a more respectful thanks than the first customer. The cook notices just how young this new customer is, and how sad and tired his eyes look. As a rule the cook never pesters his customers about their lives, especially not the night crew, but with this man he just had to know. With a sober expression, the young man tells the cook his girlfriend ran away after he had proposed at dinner. Shocked, the cook asks why. The man swallows hard before saying he'd been drafted and would be heading for the Pacific in less than three months. She had just found out about it earlier that day. He is very sympathetic towards the man but at the same time is glad he was old enough to not face a draft. Deep down he is even a little glad the man had his potential fiance run away, seeing as the cook never had a wife or even a serious lover. He heads back into the kitchen but not without first reminding his patrons that if they need anything they just have to call for him. But before he can return to his game of solitaire the diner's door opens once again and a cool night breeze blows in. Along with it enters a beautiful woman with auburn hair and a short crimson dress. Gliding across the checkered floor she takes the stool next to the younger man drinking the mug of water. The cook walks back out and asks her what she would like, and she asks for coffee with plenty of sugar and cream. For the third time the cook produces a mug from under the counter and fills it with rich black coffee from the countertop contraption and plenty of milky cream and white sugar. Handing it to the woman she expresses her thanks and hands the cook a dime, 3 cents more than a cup of coffee costs at the diner. "The rest is your tip" she assures him. Tucking the silver coin in his back pocket the cook notices the woman hasd to be the young man's lover. Slyly, she grabbs the hand of the man next to her and the two give each other a sideways glance. Realizing they'd made eye contact, they avert their eyes and stare down at the table, but their faces start to form a slight smile. The silent, gloomy man down the counter finally speaks, "You two should consider yourselves lucky." He swirls his coffee around in its mug before setting it down. The cook agrees. Then, peering out the window the cook says, "He's right. It's a lonely night for us nighthawks."
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