Thursday, February 09, 2006

Sonnet by Molly Silverstein, Grade 9

 

The way the trees move makes me want to smile

Sun shining so brightly through growing trees

Swaying and sweeping forever and a while

Autumn leaves in the cool, blue rushing breeze

 

Sun shining over the blue expanse

Heat so hot it raises off the cement

Watching the heat move; puts me in a trance

Water on my body, cracking my laments

 

Sparkling white expanse shocks my numb mind

Cold air past my ears, ringing like a bell

Sunshine bouncing off, creates crystal time

Only for warmth to come and break this spell

 

Constant cycle brings beauty back to earth

Alive and dead and all starting from birth


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 2/9/2006
1:10 PM
2/9/2006 7:26:11 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
NICE MOLLY
2/10/2006 10:23:28 AM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
wow molly so bad jk that was really good
2/10/2006 4:08:05 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
It was a very inspirational poem. I liked the use of figurative language-the personification is the best. i love poems that seem so real that you can almost feel everything that is happening to the narrator. The poem was lovely executed.
2/15/2006 5:42:18 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
nice molly i think its detaled and i wish i was like u
3/31/2006 11:14:26 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
why would you do seasons and not holidays?
2/3/2007 8:39:38 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
hey, molly.
i like the poem.
plus we have the same name...which makes me like it even more.
sincerely,
molly
molly
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