Monday, November 05, 2007

by Christina Cho (Na Yun Cho), Grade 7

I climb the oak tree
One so massive and grand

I look up to a higher branch
Where I see a tiny blue robin.

With such big eyes
It looks through mine

I climb higher
And touch the bird.

The robin chirps,
A painful one

When I see carefully,
I see its tangled wings.

Untangling its wings,
I swallow a lump.

The bird is free,
Please try to flee

Instead it looks through my eyes,
Sending me a deeper meaning

I nod my head
It flies away.


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 11/5/2007
10:21 AM
11/6/2007 9:58:27 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
That was awsome. I really enjoyed that. It had such a meaningful touch of flow to it.
11/6/2007 9:58:31 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
This peom has alot of meaning to it. It has a message not to pollute. I love it!
11/10/2007 12:48:52 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
That was really neat. It inspired me. It involves something I wish I could have done.
Longfellow
11/15/2007 5:41:06 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
love how the bird looks in the pic. lol
12/30/2007 6:40:04 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
very niiiice....!!!!
that rlly is a gr8 poem tho....i luved it...!!!!
1/3/2008 7:46:03 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
Duddeee Christina that was soo cool i l♥ved it u r going to be great when ur older c u at school!!
1/3/2008 8:06:53 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
CHRISTINA! oh my gosh, you are such a talented writer.
it's pretty cool having you in my comm arts, and sitting next to you! its amazing.
1/4/2008 8:10:42 AM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
U ROCK!!!!
1/4/2008 11:40:40 AM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
Christina your aHmazing! This poem was wonderful and has great meaning. Your besties Melanie, Mariah, and Susie.
Melanie, Susie, and Mariah
1/4/2008 12:40:52 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
Hello everybody.
1/4/2008 12:41:14 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
Hello my name is bob nugget and i think ur poem is outstanding u would be a great writer when u r older make some money money!!!☺ boooyaaaaa
1/4/2008 12:41:29 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
hey christina LOVE IT.. so much it is so.. thoughtful and is the best writing some day ur going to be famous. lol.
1/4/2008 12:41:48 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
Awesome poem
1/4/2008 12:43:17 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
Hey Christina, ur poem was very good and you are a really nice and talented person u rock my socks!!!
1/4/2008 12:43:37 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
This was an awesome poem. Happy holidays
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