Thursday, April 06, 2006

Poem by Mitchell Krasney, Grade 8

Between twilight and dawn my two dogs rest in their kennel dreaming of adventures to come.
With the sounds of the morning, they eagerly awake to start their daily routine.
By my side in the bathroom they wag their tails against my legs and lick my toes until they're numb.

After a while, they bark at the back door to announce their need to be part of the exterior scene.
Outside the house, they escape from the porch to explore our expansive grounds.
Without a care, they chase a butterfly with speed too great that they run into a window screen.

Through the newly planted garden they trudge over the petunias and marigolds while my mom frowns.
Beyond the white picket fence they see a deer frolicking in front of an old rock wall.
Despite their stumpy paws, they race with all their might to catch their prey like typical hunting hounds.

Near the woods, they stop beneath a weeping willow finding more interest in a slimy tennis ball.
Above their heads a bright red cardinal swiftly flies by and gracefully lands on a wooden bird feeder.
Up the steep hill in an attempt to slip behind the unaware bird the two mutts crawl.

Past a thorny rose bush and a patch of daylillies, they finally freeze underneath a northern white cedar.
Toward the feeder they dart without delay, but soon the bird simply soars away into the afternoon sky.
Before sunset with their tails tucked under their bodies they return home neither one wanting to be the leader.


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 4/6/2006
10:10 AM
4/11/2006 2:28:34 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
What kind of dogs do you have?I have a Rottwieler named "Trouble Bubbles".
student writer
4/13/2006 9:25:54 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
I love dogs to.I find it hard to stay mad at them.
student writer
4/13/2006 9:40:46 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
talking about a dog that people love as a friend and love to be aoren
4/13/2006 9:40:52 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
It talks about nature,it reminds me of pleasant time I had with my dogs and wonderful scent of flowers,and the beautiful afternoon sky.
4/13/2006 10:53:30 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
I like how you wrote about how dogs wag thier tails againt people's legs.
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