Tuesday, February 28, 2006

- Poem by Rushi Shah, Grade 11

 

Stars in sky, seas on earth

Luster of light emitted

Reflecting in the sea

Reminding me of who I am.

My identity, I am just me!

A baffled person not knowing

Where he wants to end up.

 

Such an immense world

What can I do?

Did I ever realize I can help someone?

Help myself.

Even help the world.

Vacillating on what I have to do

Will I have a vocation?

Do I have an aspiration?

Assuage my fear and illuminate it,

With bright light

Shining down from stars in sky.

 


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 2/28/2006
5:39 PM
2/28/2006 7:40:51 PM UTC
I just read a lovely, inspiring essay by Pulitzer Prize winning author Jhumpa Lahiri, in which she reflects about who she is. Rushi - you might like it. Take a look at: http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/11571059/site/newsweek/
sandhya
3/31/2006 3:51:27 PM UTC
I can relate to what she's talking about. The feelings and the understanings are true. It makes me think about more things,
amber
3/31/2006 7:22:34 PM UTC
beauty.
it is very pretty and I love it.
Lilliana
4/2/2006 4:56:53 PM UTC
by the way, i am a he..
just to clear up the confusion
Rushi
4/11/2006 2:45:54 PM UTC
I can understand what she is talking about. It is a nice and touching poem about life it-self. This kind of work can inspire people.
nichelle
4/13/2006 1:40:00 PM UTC
i enjoyed the poa, "just me" because it used creative wording to show its meaning. i liked the way the writer wants to change the world.
jesse
4/13/2006 1:43:29 PM UTC
This poem reminds me of the future because I look up to the sky i think what will come of me will I become a failure or not.
javel lugo
4/13/2006 2:10:15 PM UTC
This poem makes me wonder what i'm here for and where I am going in this life
Ray
4/13/2006 2:12:19 PM UTC
Ithelps me see that there is mome to life yhan what i have already sean
robertdebout
4/13/2006 2:22:50 PM UTC
"just me" helps me feel good because I know that I can fix whatever I broke,and help someone help me.
daniel
4/13/2006 3:03:41 PM UTC
I belive the person who wrote this poem is unsure of where he is headed in life,but knows he has potential ,like myself
Jyanni
4/25/2006 6:45:12 PM UTC
That is exactly true Jyanni! Wow You guys can interpret feeling pretty well.
Rushi
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