Friday, February 10, 2006
Lucy's Dance

- Poem by Isabel Bird, Grade 7

 

Lucy skips and sways

picking up her skirt and walking

like a movie star

holding her head up high

with a cheerful smile on her face.

 

We all giggle and crowd around

she laughs with us and beckons

us to join

but we shake our heads, still giggling

it's fun just watching her.


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 2/10/2006
9:26 AM
2/10/2006 1:27:21 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
Congratulations Isabel! Keep at it...

Love Evie
Evie Gurney
3/31/2006 2:54:16 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
this was good for a 7th grader, and I liked it a lot because it is funny and nice to read for little kids.
lavell
4/11/2006 10:49:28 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
I like how you share about how you and your friends cheer on another friend who can dance. It's great to help people build confidence in themself and the harder they do things the better they get.
jewelz
12/20/2006 4:49:26 PM (Eastern Standard Time, UTC-05:00)
i think that that is a great peom keep makeing great ones!
Lily
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