Tuesday, July 25, 2006
Plastic Brooms

 - Poem by karYn

We are
Conformists
Sweeping away
Out troubles
Clutching the handles
Of our plastic brooms
Miniature versions
Of Cinderella
Gouging our prince's slim
Plastic body
With our rough, chewed
Fingernails
We sweep with
Plastic brooms


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 7/25/2006
8:40 PM
7/26/2006 11:06:32 PM UTC
Karyn thats great! Good job!
Lauren
10/18/2006 6:18:17 PM UTC
I love this. The world is really full of conformists. And the part about grabing our princes' bodies with our chewed fingernails. GREAT! AMAZING!
J-NA
J
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