Tuesday, October 03, 2006

The following story is an interpretation of the 1,000 Words image in the September, 2006 issue of Writing Magazine.

 

Pete Saves The Day

- Story by Elle MacGillis, Grade 7

 

Once upon a time at a grand hotel in Florida, called "Shades of Green," there lived a tree frog named Pete. Pete lived on the golf course near the edge of the hotel's property (hole number eight to be exact). Pete was a pretty normal tree frog; he had plenty of polliwog friends, a nice warm tree for a home, and many insects to eat. But there was one thing that made him different from other tree frogs. Pete loved to hang-glide. It wasn't just his hobby. It was his LIFE. Day and night he would hang-glide, hang-glide, and hang-glide. 

 

One rainy afternoon, Pete was hang-gliding over the hotel swimming pool. He was looking for an unlucky bug that had fallen into the pool, when he heard someone cry.  He looked over his right shoulder to see Macie, the monarch butterfly, who lived in the marsh next to the golf course Pete lived on. Her wing was caught on a thorn bush that stood right outside the front entrance of the hotel! Unfortunately, the thorn made a hole all the way through her wing! Pete swooped down and started circling Macie. He did not get off his hang-glider though, for fear that he would get caught on the bush too. 

 

"Please, Pete, help me!" Macie cried.

 

"Just stay still and I'll swoop down and grab you!"

 

Pete started circling lower and lower. When he was right above Macie he stuck out his tongue and slurrrrrped it right onto her head. With a short pull to the left and a jerk upward he pulled her off the rose's thorn and up to his hang-glider. 

 

"Gotcha!" Pete smiled at Macie. She smiled back. She wrapped her legs around Pete as she closed her eyes, ready to hang on for her life. Within a minute, the wind was at their backs as they took off toward the "Critters in Need" hospital.

 

That night Macie underwent reconstructive wing surgery. The surgery, with physical therapy, would enable her to fly again!

 

The next day she awoke to Pete at her side.

 

"Pete, you have no idea how much that meant to me yesterday! Without you I don't think I would have survived." Macie whispered.

 

Pete tried to talk but found he could not speak. Instead he just smiled and nodded his head as tears rolled down his cheeks.


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 10/3/2006
4:50 PM
10/3/2006 5:07:56 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
Very cute story, Elle! Great job!
10/3/2006 9:45:43 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
oh my gosh, Elle!! i loved ur story!! i can't beleive that u and Alex both got in as winners, that's soo cool!! Congrats times a million!!!!
10/4/2006 12:44:25 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
Hey elle! Good story. You should name your frog that.
parker
10/4/2006 4:49:03 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
Great story! I loved it!
10/4/2006 7:24:40 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
These picutres are so cool!!!!!!! The story rocks my socks!!!! GOODJOB TO YOU!!!! =)
10/5/2006 5:03:40 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
This is a very sweet story!!! It reminds me of a time when my fried's hand was stuck in a rusty fence at my school's play-ground last year. I told her how to make her hand smaller without having to pull it out. So i helped her slide her hand out of the fence. She said it hurt but then she said that if i wouldn't of helped her it could hurt much more at that moment. After that we went back to class and I gave her a bandaid. I felt so good for the rest of the year!!! Right now we're best friends and i'm very glad about that. Oh!!! I forgot to tell you that her name was Amanda!!! Well anyways I love that story so much!!! pCe!
10/6/2006 8:50:13 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
Wow Ellie- what an honor to have your story posted on this blog. I still remember when you were in 1st grade and look at you now!! Way to go!
Congratulations and keep writing!
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