Friday, February 03, 2006

Poem by Carol Kuruvilla, Grade 11

the river creaks through ancient city gates
falling in drops that kiss the dust
on the sun streaked marble

plains of my face that
hate the way you look at me as
if I hurt you with this white morning

lie on the water while the gondola
swings softly with the current
of splintered, unsteady ocean

waves that would shatter and curse the moment
I broke the light with my tempest
so strong I don't hate

you touch the sleeping water
and drown in the echoes of silence
that cry between our bridge of sighs


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 2/3/2006
3:02 PM
2/3/2006 11:34:00 PM UTC
Its better than I can do!
Andrea
3/11/2006 7:12:20 PM UTC
Nice work. Keep it up.

Anonymous
4/13/2006 2:57:16 PM UTC
why did you write about rivers and creeks?
ronecia
12/10/2006 8:23:36 PM UTC
Nice.

Keep it up.

-JaKundiz
Raj
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