Friday, December 22, 2006

- Story by Austin Siegemund-Broka, Grade 9

The businessman was in no mood for the Saint. One side of his coat weighed down, he walked briskly down the sidewalk, stopping at nothing. He scattered pigeons, frightened dogs, stumbled on cracks, and nearly plowed down children as he strode purposefully forward. Head bent, eyes moving back and forth and up and down, tongue darting out every so often, he moved ever closer to his office building, and to the turning point of his miserable life. The dread he felt was that of a child at the dentist's door.

So when a figure half-walked, half-stumbled up to him out of the cold sunlight, the businessman's pace only increased. Adorned with numerous cross necklaces and saint medallions, the trim figure was small, with straight, mussed up, short blond hair. His khaki pants ended a good inch before his socks began, and these led into running shoes that had clearly seen better times. His white shirt, advertising a "Northwood Community Church," was also a tad small, and displayed a rather impressive coffee stain.

"Hullo, good stranger!" the man shrilled in a distinctly western accent. He held out his hand, which the flustered businessman ran into, and quickly grabbed without looking. His thumb went the wrong way, into the other man's palm, and clumped his fingers up oddly. The figure was unperturbed, and sidestepped frantically to keep up with the businessman. "How's your day going? Seen any signs from the Lord?" asked the squeaky figure, and the businessman just blinked several times, shook his head, and fired his tongue around his mouth again. The other man tried a slightly different approach. "What's happening in your life?" This at least got the businessman to look at the short, blond stranger. Something about the odd little man almost made the businessman explain his situation; his wife desperately needed an operation to help her recover from a rare illness, that he couldn't scrape together the medical bill, that his child's school progress was descending as a result, and that the reason that one side of his coat was heavy wouldn't exactly benefit his roommate at the office. But that was a big almost, and the businessman merely grunted.

"I should probably explain. I'm from a program at my church, the Northwood Community Church, an' we're called the Saints. I guess that'd make me a Saint, huh?" The Saint exclaimed with pride, and elbowed the businessman. This drew no response, so the Saint continued. "Our program's aim is to emphasize the community part of our church, so we decided to just go out on the street like this and talk to people, try to involve them in our big happy church family, you know?"

The businessman did not know. It had been a long time since he had seen, or used, the words happy and family within at least two paragraphs. He merely grunted again. "Not a very talkative fellow, are you?" asked the Saint, and the businessman grunted again. The Saint knew there was some irony in that, he just couldn't draw it together into one coherent sentence. Thus he continued on. "Come to think of it, our church is in a bit of trouble. We're desperately in need of refurbishment." It seemed that the Saint was pacified for a moment, staring glumly at the ground. Of course, this was not the case. In seconds his odd little head bobbed up, plastered with the familiar, bordering-insane grin."Play any sports?"

At last, this drew something from the businessman. "Golf now. Basketball in high school." The Saint barely contained his excitement.

"Yeah, you look like the basketball type." Thus the questions continued for, as the businessman saw as he frequently looked at his watch, approximately three minutes and eighteen seconds. Then the Saint touched a nerve. "How's your family?"

The businessman swallowed, and glanced at the beaming figure. His confidence in the strange little man had grown, and he said as much as "My wife's sick. I need to get some money for an operation for her." The Saint's grin disappeared, and his eyes bulged in his tiny ovular head. "Oh, that's terrible. You can look to Jesus, you know. Say, what's your wife's name?" The businessman raised an eyebrow.

"Marie. Marie Daniels. Why?" The Saint merely tapped his nose.

"I'll see if we can do something about your little predicament. Why, how about I buy you a drink?" They had reached a little Starbucks cart, and the Saint promptly purchased a Frappucino. He offered it to the businessman, who just waved his hand. The Saint shrugged, as if to say "suit yourself," and held onto the napkin wrapped around the drink.

"You know what?" The Saint looked up at the businessman. "You look like you need a bit more of a relationship with God." The businessman raised an eyebrow again, and began eyeing the Frappucino. "Mind if I write down my church's name? You could, you know, get involved or something. We have all sorts of terrific programs. Say, you could be a Saint too!" The little man shared a laugh with himself, and pulled out a pen. He crouched down, and the businessman found himself stopping to wait. On the napkin that had been wrapped around the drink, the Saint wrote out his church's name, and proudly presented it to the businessman, who indifferently crammed it into his heavy coat pocket.

The businessman glanced at the drink again, almost forgetting the weight in his pocket. Finally, temptation overcame him and he gingerly pulled it from the Saint's fingers. The odd little man just smiled inwardly and said, "Enjoy."

 

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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 12/22/2006
11:05 AM
 Thursday, December 21, 2006

The following poem is an interpretation of the 1,000 Words image in the November/ December, 2006 issue of Writing Magazine.

One Lonely Snowman
- Poem by
Emily Deason, Grade 8

One lonely snowman
standing alone on a peak
has he been there one day?
or maybe a whole week

One lonely snowman
with no one else around
is he able to talk
or can he make no sound

One lonely snowman
did he just come to be?
does it make him sad when
he looks down and sees no feet

One lonely snowman
I ask, are you cold?
does your scarf keep you warm
until you are very old

One lonely snowman
taking in the day
hopefully he'll enjoy it
until he slowly melts away

 

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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 12/21/2006
1:04 PM
 Wednesday, December 20, 2006

- Story by Abbie Dinowitz

 

As I crawled out of the anthill early yesterday morning, I was happy to see the enormous yellow sun shining brightly over the park. The sight was a huge relief, since the previous day it had rained and my friends and I had experienced several near-death experiences in puddles.

 

I reentered the hill quietly, careful not to bother my relatives who were still sleeping. There are more than a hundred of us who reside in the hill; we are the biggest ant family in the area.

 

My favorite older brother was awake, so I invited him to join me for breakfast.

 

"Let me relax for a little while, Sammy!" he grunted at me. Josh never wants to do anything with me anymore.  We used to have picnic-searching adventures and relay races all summer long. But this summer is different. Now all he cares about is journeying across the street every day so he can visit his girlfriend, Lisa. 

 

I sighed and went back outside alone.

 

I found some crumbs from a chocolate chip cookie near the big oak tree, but I didn't have much of an appetite. I wandered aimlessly for a little while, waiting for everybody to wake up. Soon, a group of small, giggly ants emerged from the hole at the top of the hill.

 

"Morning, Sammy!"  they shouted cheerfully. 

 

I greeted my cousins with a grin. Although they are girls, Jamie, Jill, Jessica, and Joanne are always ready to cheer me up when I'm upset. As I shared my cookie crumbs with them, I updated them on the Josh situation. It was old news though; I had been complaining to them about my brother daily. They knew that the best solution was to change the subject.

 

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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 12/20/2006
3:30 PM
 Tuesday, December 19, 2006

- Poem by Katharine Larson, Grade 6

 

I am happy and excited

I wonder why we can't have everything for free

I hear my grandfather's voice

I see Broadway

I want a Golden Retriever

 

I believe we all make mistakes

I ask why some people are nice and some people aren't

 

I am happy and excited

I pretend to be the best dancer

I feel rocks at my feet

I touch silk that is not there

I worry what luck I am going to have

I cry when my friends are mean

 

I believe we are equal

I ask who invented people

 

I am happy and excited

I understand we can't do everything we want

I say people should help out the poor

I dream I will live happily for the rest of my life

I try to be the best person I can be

I hope to get a scholarship

I believe we all have a good quality

 

I ask why dogs can not talk

I am happy and excited 

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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 12/19/2006
12:20 PM


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