Thursday, February 14, 2008

by Devon Fonville

I had something I treasured but didn't cherish.
It was given by a person who got the same from me.
The treasure wasn't round or bounced.
It wasn't fluffy with cotton in it.
It wasn't nothing that can be written on
but it could be torn up,
it also could be broken,
but I don't think people wanted it
to brake or tear apart.
They wanted it to stay together,
but my gift began to crumble,
and tear time by time.
It never occurred to me that it would be taken away
so I had no worry.
But it left.

PS The thing I treasure so much was a thing called love.


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 2/14/2008
2:11 PM

- by Katherine Xie, Grade 11

Glittering frost upon the windows; glistening streams down the concrete. The morning rises to a beautiful day: a soft chill, a swift breeze, a glowing sunray. Stand still and watch this brilliant phenomenon. There is no need to remember last night's tears, or think about today's deadlines.

A setting sensation is so common that walkers keep on trudging, eyes fixed forward, mind fixed on the future. How about now? Yes that's what matters.

A moment of stillness and nothingness - think nothing - is nice. Those gathered dreams, scattered and surrendered one after another, fly away into the lighted air; they are impossible. But those don't matter right now. Those confrontations of faults and reasons, yet to come, tauntingly run in the mind. But those don't matter right now. Fantasy is nice. To think no obligations is to think freedom. Just for one moment, reality is unreal, because it doesn't matter. Spread the wings and bathe in sunlight; feel the air tinkle, hear the leaves rustle. For a moment, this is all that matters; this melody is the life of this second.

We're all singers, so sing in your heart. We're all sleepers, so sleep in your mind. We're all achievers, so achieve in your dream. We're all inhabitants, so live.


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StudentWriter    Posted by
StudentWriter
on 2/14/2008
8:25 AM
 Tuesday, February 12, 2008

An eyelash fell off yesterday, and I made a few wishes. World peace. To be a millionaire. To wake up and realize I'm actually married to Brad Pitt (and I look like Angelina). An end to the writers' strike.

Well, one out of four ain't bad.

That's right! The strike is over! Woo-hoo!

Television shows will start to come back pretty soon. We can catch up on all of our favorite shows. No longer is there a need to watch Rock of Love 7: Tommy Tutone Edition (Jenny, Jenny, I Really Want Your Number!) or Who Wants to Buy My Baby? or America's Next Top Paperweight Quality Control Assistant General Manager or whatever other reality show they come out with next. There will be scripted shows!

Say it with me. "Scripted." It sounds so nice rolling off the tongue.

Who would have thought the strike would have lasted three months? Who would have thought we'd miss new TV so much?

I mean, yeah, don't become a couch potato. You should still go out and see natural light once in awhile. And, of course, don't start slacking on your reading. But at least there will be options.

Now, if only my other three wishes would come true...


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    Posted by

on 2/12/2008
1:51 PM
 Friday, February 08, 2008

OK, this is really random. And no, for once this isn't going to be an entry about the on-going writers' strike. (Although, I did read that the strike might be ending soon. Yay!) But I was doing some writing today--as is required in my line of work--and I thought I did a pretty good job, if I do say so myself. But writing is so subjective. What if all my adoring fans don't like it?

Remember that scene in A Christmas Story (I'm sure you've seen it--they practically play it 24/7 in December. Not that I'm complaining, because it is a hilarious movie.) where Ralphie has to write a theme for his teacher on what he wants for Christmas?  He writes this empassioned essay about how he wants "a Red Ryder BB gun with a compass in the stock, and this thing which tells time." Then he imagines his teacher saying, "Poetry. Sheer poetry, Ralph! An A+!" Well, when he gets the paper back, there is no A+. Instead, scrawled across the top, it says "You'll shoot your eye out!"

Sigh.

Sometimes, doesn't it just feel like that? You put your heart and soul into a piece of writing, and all you get back is the proverbial "You'll shoot your eye out."

Anyway, my point (I do have one) is that it shouldn't matter what you write. OK, yes, for school, if you're assigned an essay, please follow your teacher's requirements, and do the studying and all the preperation and all that. I don't want any angry letters, please. But anyway, I really feel that it's most important to write about something you care about. And enjoy doing it. It's not the subject that matters.

So write on. Don't worry what people think about it. As they say, you can't please everyone. As long as you enjoy writing, that's all that matters. And the more you do it, the more confident you'll get with your writing, and the better you'll get.

And if you do write about how you want a BB gun, be careful.

After all, you don't want to shoot your eye out.


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on 2/8/2008
2:13 PM


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