Tuesday, October 13, 2009

In the STRANGER THAN FICTION issue, we asked you to write a story similar to the War of the Worlds idea. Below is one student's rendition. Enjoy.

MARS ATTACKS!
By Matthew Villegas

Marcus Fenix was a thirteen year old boy living in Dallas, Texas.  He lived at home with his three year old brother and mother. He had just taken the bus home from school and turned on the television. His mother had work that day so the baby sitter, Megan was there to watch him and his brother. Megan and Marcus's brother, David were sitting on the couch singing their ABC's.

"Start your homework before you watch T.V.," said Megan. 

"Alright," replied Marcus. 

He went to turn off the T.V., but before he turned it off, a news bulletin appeared on the screen.  The local weatherman was shown standing in front of a weather map. "here is a thunderstorm warning for Dallas, Texas.  There are reports of lightning, strong winds and heavy rain.  The storm will hit around 6:00 pm."

Marcus heard thunder in the distance, and glanced out the window. The weatherman was right; a huge storm was on its way. Marcus could see lightning darting out of the ominous storm clouds.  "Should we bring the dog in," asked Marcus. 

"Yeah go ahead," said Megan. Marcus brought the dog in the house, and it immediately rushed in under the coffee table. 

"That's strange, Bandit never acts like that,” said Megan.  "I've never seen him hide from anything."  The dog buried its head under its paws and wouldn't stop squealing over and over again. 

"Now that I think about it; on the way home from school there wasn't a cloud in the sky. It is strange how fast that storm developed."  Marcus remarked.  The phone started to ring; Marcus answered. 

"Hello?"

"Hey honey, I saw the news. Are you guys going to be okay? How is your brother?"

"Yeah Mom we'll be fine. David is fine."

"Alright well you guys call if you need anything okay."

"Okay mom we will. Bye."  Marcus hung up the phone and went into his room to grab a flashlight... just incase the power went out. When he got back into the living room he saw a different news man. 
"This is CNN News anchor Michael Stevenson reporting. We are going to Jack Johnson live in New York Times Square."  A man in a drenched yellow rain coat appeared standing in front of the camera. He began to speak.

"Thanks Michael. Now just a few minutes ago we had one heck of a storm pouring down on us. The storm was pouring down heavy rain with winds of eighty miles an hour, and then it all together stopped. The wind has died down completely." The reporter pointed up toward the sky and the camera followed. There were dark storm clouds hanging in the air. The strangest thing about this storm, Michael, is that the wind was actually blowing towards the storm, instead of away from it. It was like a switch was suddenly flipped, and now there is complete silence in New....."  The reporter was interrupted by the sound of a deafening horn blowing. The reporter was shown covering his ears in pain. Suddenly the Earth shook with a violent force. The camera fell and hit the ground. Car alarms rang out, and people were heard screaming. 

Marcus and his family watched in silence, too dumbfounded to speak. The camera was picked back up by the cameraman who cursed under his breath. He focused back on the reporter who was just recovering. He stood back up, and looked towards the camera.  "It looks like New York has just suffered a huge earthquake ladies and gentlemen."  People now rushed out onto the streets in distress and confusion. Some were panicking; others were too shocked to panic. A person in the background was screaming and pointing.  "Oh my God; what is that?"  Others began to look up in surprise. 

The camera looked back up toward the storm. Suddenly, out of the storm, emerged an enormous machine. It was a dark black that could cover ten football fields. It shadowed over New York City, and sat in the air like a large beast waiting for the right moment to strike. The people were no longer screaming; everyone was looking up in awe. The reporter dropped his microphone.
 
Another horn rang out; this time louder than before. The Earth shook again, but with more force. A building collapsed in the background. Citizens were screaming and running from the enormous beast.  The camera fell, and was trampled by the stampede of people. Marcus looked back at Megan. She was as pale as a ghost as tears slid down her face. Marcus reached in his pocket and pulled out his lucky rabbit's foot. He found it when he was very young, and he used to believe it could protect him when he was scared. He tried to outgrow it, but he couldn't ever bring himself to get rid of it. He was now hoping that it could protect him. 

The video went back to Michael Stevenson at the news studio. The fear in his eyes was apparent.  His voice quivered as he spoke. "Ladies and Gentlemen, there have been reports of these same events in every major city in the entire World. All of our technology is being hacked as we speak.  Computers, cell phones, and televisions are all short circuiting."  Even as he spoke the television was beginning to fade out.  "Planes are falling out of the sky. I'm afraid there is nothing more we can do.  God be with us all." 

The television along with the all electricity shut off. Megan pulled out her cell phone. "It's no use everything's off," shouted Marcus. 

"What are we gonna do? It's all over now."  David couldn't understand what was happening, but seeing his brother break down in tears told him something horrible was happening. He buried his face in Megan's arms. 

"Don't panic," she said. "Let's just get in the storm shelter." They rushed to the backyard. The dog refused to get out of the house, so they had to leave him behind. The storm was closing over them now. As Marcus opened the back door, the wind ripped it off its hinges. Lightning was striking all around them, and the rain felt like needles falling down. Marcus glanced up at the monster of a storm. He knew that storm would decide their fate. They got in the shelter and shut the door tight. 

Marcus stared at the floor, praying that this wasn't the end. He hoped his mother was okay. He reached in his pocket for his rabbit's foot and held it tightly. Megan sat and hugged David as tight as she could, while she deeply wept. No one said a word in the storm shelter. The thunder was drowning out any noises they made. The noise of the storm was almost unbearable. 

Then, suddenly it ended. All was calm. A deafening horn rang out causing Marcus to distort his face in pain. The earth shook with a violent force. The rabbit's foot dropped to the floor.             


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Bryon    Posted by
Bryon
on 10/13/2009
3:50 PM
 Friday, October 09, 2009

On the back cover of the STRANGER THAN FICTION issue, we asked you to come up with some crazy and creative headlines for the following fantastic photos. Thanks to everyone who submitted their lines! Here are our favorites!

"Hanging Inside-Out"
   - Olivia Curtis

"You Know It's a Bad Day When You Wake Up On the Wrong Side of Your Apartment Building"
   - T. Vanwey's 8th grade class

"People Attempt To Rob Spiderman's Residence"
   - Mary Sears' Sophomore Reading Class

 

"POPtabolicious!"
   - Ms. Burzynski's class

"Recycler of the Month"
   - Emily Schneider

"My Future Wife"
   - Matt Bromley

 

"Fishy Toe Fungus"
   - Jordan Brown

"Nail Biters"
   - Drayton Blumer


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Bryon    Posted by
Bryon
on 10/9/2009
1:00 PM
 Wednesday, October 07, 2009

In issue 3, we gave you five news stories and challenged you to select the real ones from the fake. Now, we're ready to reveal the answers.

1. Man in the Attic: Remember this story? It was about a man who had been hiding in a family's attic for days, slowly robbing them. Well, that creepy story is true! It really happened in Wilkes-Barre, Pennsylvania. Did you believe it when you read it? Read about it here.

2. Prison Reunites Long Lost Twins: This strange report of identical twins who reconnected through a twist of fate. A prison guard met his long-lost brother, who entered as a new inmate. Was this a true tale? No. Just a tall tale invented by READ editor Audra Pace, who has a love for stories about twins.

3. Nursery Rhyme Myster Solved... Sort Of: This London news story potentially found an author to the nursery rhyme "The Itsy, Bitsy Spider." Did you buy this story? If so, we've got a bridge to sell you. This was all fiction created by editor Bryon Cahill.

4. Dog-Glo: By far the weirdest story in the lot, this report of South Korean scientists who tested a gene on dogs that gave them a fluorescent red glow was actually 100% true! Cute, mutant puppies finally exist! Read about it here.

5. Photos Capture Discontent Around Nation's Capital:This article outlined the new laws surrounding photos taken of national monuments. Fortunately for tourists everywhere, this story was totally false! Alicia Zadrozny created it after a recent trip to Washington, DC.

So, how did your guesses measure up against the answers? Can you spot a true story when you see it? Leave a comment letting us know which ones you guessed right! Thanks for playing!


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Audra    Posted by
Audra
on 10/7/2009
10:11 AM
 Monday, October 05, 2009

Oh how we love messing around with words here at READ. We recently printed some wacky nursery rhymes that were bogged down with apoetic*, clunky, and cumbersome synonyms. Here's a sample of how not to use a thesaurus: Mary possessed a diminutive immature sheep, Its woolly outer coat was pallid as frozen water vapor. To all the conceivable locations that Mary journeyed, The infant sheep could be certain to travel.  

A READer named Daniel S. responded to the challenge with these witty takes on old nursery rhymes. Thanks you--canny, clever, adroit, scribe--you!

Jack Be Agile

Jack be agile,
Jack be speedy,
Jack vault over
The cylindrical object composed of wax.

Aged  Mother Hubbard

Aged Mother Hubbard
Traversed to the sideboard
To retrieve her Canis Lupus Familiaris a rounded object that is composed of the minerals 
   Calcium and Iron,
But when she reached there, the sideboard appeared void,
and so the needy Canis Lupus Familiaris had naught.

--TAKE A READer challenge--

Follow the same exercise and create a new nursery rhyme or song using only antonyms.

* We know that apoetic is not really a word. But it's a more poetic way of saying unpoetic. See the irony!


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Alicia    Posted by
Alicia
on 10/5/2009
4:04 PM


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